Write by the Lake: Day 5

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Then it was Friday. Summertime weeks speed by; this one seemed to go doubly fast. Just when we got started, there we were, wrapping up.

I’d barely been able to finish my homework for Friday because of the author event at Mystery to Me on Thursday night. That turned out well. (Except for the drive into Madison, at the tail end of rush hour, causing me to arrive just in time.) The cozy crowd included my husband, a long-time academic friend who was also attending Write by the Lake, and a new friend from the workshop. And there were a few others, too, and some of them stayed around to chat a bit after the q&a with journalist Doug Moe. Doug asked great questions that allowed me to talk about Angels of the Underground, which I love to do. It all lasted for about an hour and a half, and Joanne kept the cash register open long enough for me to buy the new novel by fellow Wisconsin writer, Ann Garvin.

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So I didn’t get to my workshop homework until Friday morning. But I got it done. During the session, we read through some of those completed assignments and worked on another writing exercise. To wrap things up, the instructor talked a bit about the querying process involved in finding an agent.

Overall, this was a good experience. There is great value in connecting with other writers (our workshop was a great group) and on developing writing skills. I wish there had been more of that latter thing, especially as applied to our individual projects. The six of us in the workshop all have book projects started. We need to keep going.

Throughout the week I kept thinking about how I would have structured a writing workshop. At the top of my list: have the attendees do a lot of writing, critiquing, and revising. Our homework assignments and in-class exercises were quality assignments for honing our skills of observation and description. We should have then applied what we learned to our manuscripts-in-progress, with the goal of writing 5-10 pages per night. Copies of those new pages could have circulated within the group for critiques and rewrites. That would’ve been a wonderfully productive workshop.

Now, the rest of the summer looms.

 

Write by the Lake: Days 3 and 4

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Two productive, packed days at Write by the Lake. Although I haven’t spent any lakeside time doing any actual writing, I’ve at least been able to enjoy looking at the lake every day. Yesterday was another warm (bordering on hot), sunny day. Today has been partly sunny and cooler. This was the view from our meeting room in the Pyle Center.

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Yesterday began with a discussion about how the information you choose to exclude from your narrative matters as much in shaping your story’s point of view and theme(s) as what you decide to include.

We also talked about the slippery issue of voice. I really struggle with that–trying to figure out if I have an effective one, trying to figure out how to define it–so I especially appreciated that part of the session. We analyzed a passage from Frank McCourt’s memoir, Angela’s Ashes, to underscore certain points about voice.

Today we finished up reading and critiquing the 2000-word submissions. Mine was the final one. I stayed up late last night to do some revisions, and I was glad I did. The pages were better for it, I think, but still very much feel like a draft. So particularly at this stage in the project (early days), the comments and questions were very helpful.

It’s hard to believe that tomorrow will be the last day of Write by the Lake.

But before I get to that, I have my first author event at the Mystery to Me bookstore in Madison: a Q&A with journalist Doug Moe. I’ll post about it–and maybe include some photos–tomorrow.

 

Write by the Lake: Day 2

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The rain held off through the afternoon; it was another beautiful day on the UW campus.

Workshop sessions started at 9:30 this morning. There are seven of us in this particular non-fiction workshop, and most of us arrived early to our assigned room. We had time for some catch-up conversations before the instructor arrived: talk about our individual projects and about how we fared with our writing homework.

Then the instructor pulled us into our business of the morning. We went over the homework responses–how we imagined the possible endings to a particular scenario. It was an interesting exercise, a way of getting us to think about how and why people respond to certain situations.

We discussed how to construct log lines and the purpose for constructing them. You can never tell when you might need a log line (also known as an elevator pitch), but it’s a good idea to be able to explain, clearly and concisely, what your book is about. Most people really won’t listen to a long, detailed explanation–no matter how interesting the topic. It’s hard to boil down a book’s essence to one or two sentences, yet crafting a log line can really help you to keep focused on the basics of your book: who is the main character and what is their central conflict or obstacle?

We learned about the components for a book proposal. I wrote one for Angels of the Underground, and I’m in the process of writing one for this new project, so this was a helpful review.

There was also another very good discussion of another group member’s 2000-word submission. The instructor delivered insightful comments, and the rest of us added a few additional points. Overall, another productive morning.

Write by the Lake: Day 1

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It was beautiful in Madison, Wisconsin, today. I drove in from the west this morning, leaving home extra early because I wasn’t sure how heavy rush hour traffic would be, especially through construction zones. It wasn’t bad (I learned how to drive in suburban Chicago), and I arrived about a half hour before conference registration.

I walked to Memorial Union, along the Terrace, which spans a portion of Lake Mendota.

It wasn’t crowded at all this morning. A groundskeeper was busy blowing away some trash, and a couple of women occupied different tables, swiping away on their electronic devices. Construction workers were the most conspicuous, applying themselves to a variety of projects that will make this portion of the lake shore even more inviting. Someday. Right now the construction is loud and annoying. But if you face away from it and look out on the lake, you can almost ignore it.

I wasn’t there for the scenery, though. After a good bit of a walk, I headed over to the campus building that was hosting this year’s Write by the Lake conference. For five days, very committed writers work in small groups, divided up by genre, to make their writing better.

Good writers know this is a never-ending process. There is always room for improvement, no matter how much or how little you have written.

In the non-fiction class I signed up for, today was mostly a getting-to-know-you day. There was also a very practical exercise about identifying themes, which are important in non-fiction works. One group member had her 2000-word submission critiqued. It was a friendly and helpful critique. I think it put everyone at ease about what will go on for the rest of the week. I don’t know when my submission will come up for critique.

I signed up for this conference because I want to get a solid start on my next book. I think it will help to have some feedback, even at this very early stage.

And now, I have a little bit of homework to do for tomorrow.

 

My First Bookstore Event

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It’s happening on Thursday, at 7:00 p.m. on June 16 at

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This wonderful Madison bookstore was one of many independents that showcased my book during the winter after it had been chosen as a January Midwest Connections Pick by the Midwest Independent Booksellers Association.

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I hope you can come out and listen to journalist Doug Moe interview me about the book, and take part in the conversation.